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Demyx walked through the halls of the castle, looking for Axel, whom he hadn’t seen in a while, and truly missed. When he couldn’t locate the pyro, he went to the only place he hadn’t looked, which was Axel’s room. He felt kind of foolish for not looking here first, but he was ready to right his mistake.

“Axie… are you in there?” He said as he knocked on the door marked VIII. When no answer came he slowly opened the door, finding an empty room. “Guess not…” Demyx turned to leave, when a yellow piece of paper caught his eye under the bedstand light. “What’s that?“ He walked over and sat on the bed, picking up the paper and reading it.

I’m burning…
This pit of hell I’ve fallen into
That will destroy all that I am.
My heart is long lost…
But with him I felt still complete.
Now he’s gone, leaving a gaping hole
In my very soul…
I know they try, but they can never know this pain…
Oh how I wish I could go back in time
Stop myself from making this mistake
But sadly there is no way…
If he could only see
The extremes I would go to…
I have to find him, so that I may be complete again.


The paper was now stained with tears and Demyx’s eyes were red.

“What have I done…”
©2007-2008 ~SitarPlayerIX
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A sequel to a poem my Axie :iconbondofflames: did a while ago called Demyx's Poem :D

Although this isn't really a poem, but who cares. :lmao: I tried to make it good, even though it doesn't even come close to his :XD:
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*RabidFangurl14:iconRabidFangurl14: Nov 8, 2007, 5:13:45 PM
Awww... so sad.

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=BondOfFlames:iconBondOfFlames: Nov 8, 2007, 6:14:05 PM
Awesome job. :happycry:
I really like it, nice job :heart:
It's sad too...

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~SitarPlayerIX:iconSitarPlayerIX: Nov 8, 2007, 6:22:16 PM
Well I didn't mean to make it that sad but I guess that's just what came out ^^; :hug: Thanks though :D

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~Nalextia:iconNalextia: Nov 10, 2007, 4:30:54 PM
i think it's pretty cool ^_^

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~CloakedSchemer06:iconCloakedSchemer06: Nov 12, 2007, 8:43:18 PM
tch yet another touching poem. *rolls eyes* you all are going too soft...

ooc - awwwww! it's adorable!! great job Dem!
~Zexy~

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Why did you go? You left without saying a word. Not a hello, not a good-bye. Nothing. You left me here with a broken... heart. Everyday, since you left, I make it rain, so I can cry with no one knowing.
I'm Shenzi in Val's *KingdomHeartsArmy
~SitarPlayerIX:iconSitarPlayerIX: Nov 13, 2007, 4:06:06 PM
Hmf. I happen to know that you have a soft side too :lick:

ooc- Thank ye :D

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Gaara of ~RisingFightingSpirit :aww:

~PROUD FAN of FDP~

Demyx says: Give a heart to Org. XIII! [link]
~CloakedSchemer06:iconCloakedSchemer06: Nov 14, 2007, 9:06:53 PM
really.. *frowns* prove it.
~Zexy~

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Why did you go? You left without saying a word. Not a hello, not a good-bye. Nothing. You left me here with a broken... heart. Everyday, since you left, I make it rain, so I can cry with no one knowing.
I'm Shenzi in Val's *KingdomHeartsArmy
~Ruushii14:iconRuushii14: Dec 20, 2007, 7:22:10 AM
its soo sad well done

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~Mora68:iconMora68: Feb 5, 2008, 1:17:09 AM
nice job, you are a good writer

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